Ok, so who does this enemy unit associate with? What "soliders" are being referenced in the description? Where can this animal be found? Why does this animal exist? How can it be made relevant to the TSoG plot and make it worthwhile for Craig to make it?
'Cause honestly, it seems more like an enemy made up for the sake of making up a new enemy, rather than covering something that is lacking within the enemy sets on offer.
Just to remind folks- we have already formulated quite a few animals in the first place, and I have to say those formulated ideas fit in better than this one.